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Last Date:2012-01-25

Question: Guys what do you thinkkkk?? please HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPP?

guys actually i'm living in spain, i received an email from a company who based in italy, germany and austria, they asked me about my future plans ( destination if it's for long term or short term, if i'm moving bymyself or with my family.....), i sent this email, what do you think, please help me, it's urgent????

Dear Mr. Jhon,

Thank you so much for your reply.

First at all, let's cut the option italy, actually i'm interested in moving to another country who offers better quality of life - education system, health system.......for my future kids, using the recent study, Germany is ranked in the top 3 of europe - for this i think Germany or Austria goes well with my future expectations, so i confirm it's for very long term.

Actually i'm single, so i can move by myself in the begining, with the possibility of my parents visiting after a while.

About the job, please send me the technical description and we will discuss with more details the face-to-face interview.

Please if you need more information, dont hesitate to contact me.

Looking forward to your answer.

The best regards,
am


Answer:

This is a formal letter, so make sure your spelling/grammar is good. I* and not i,
You should only use 3 dots '...' and not '........'
It's Europe*. Don't.*
You know these things, make sure you correct them.
Other than that, the letter is okay.

Who wrote the first email? You or them? If you contacted them first, then the email is ok, but if they were the ones to contact you out of the blue, then I suspect it is a scam.

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